Evangeline

First Draft Feedback

Today we recieved feedback from our first draft after students had peer assesed them and wrote down what they thought about it. Overall, there was a wide range of different opinions.
We have established in our group that we need to improve the:
  • music
  • titles
  • camera movement
  • length
  • acting
  • sound




One of the regularly occurring comments that we received for our film opening was that the audience 'didn't get it' or 'it didn't make a lot of sense'. This therefore made us have a rethink of how we can make the opening more clear and easier to understand. We would need to shoot a few more scenes and re write parts of the script and go over parts of the storyboard. The plot had to be changed to make things a little more understandable.